Mark asks…
does this paragraph make sense?
Mike the cop and queeine are portrayed as god, or the path to happiness. In the book “Harlem Renaissance” mike gives Dennis a second chance. Mike says, “I am going to take a gamble. Something tells me that there’s more brains in that big head of yours than you realize. He took a deep breath, looking skyward, as though searching for a divine tiebreaker, before sternly motioning his head toward the stairwell. Get out of here! He barked.” Just like Dennis, Sammy is given a second chance because of queeine. She was so high up she didn’t care that she was walking into A & P only with a bikini and she didn’t even notice when Sammy quit his job for her. Lengel the store manger says, “Sammy you don’t want to do this to your mom and dad,” he tells me. Its true I don’t but once you begin a gesture its fatal not to go through with it. I fold the apron; “Sammy” stitched in red on the pocket, and put it on the counter, and drop the bow tie on top of it. “You’ll feel this for the rest of your life” Lengel says, and I know that true, too, but remembering how he made that pretty girl blush makes me so scrunchy inside I punch the no sale tab and the machine whirs “pee-pul” and the drawer splats out. I look around for my girls, but they’re gone, of course.”
Rebecca answers:
Erm, no, for a start, there is a lot of points where you haven’t put a capital lettter in front of a persons name! What the hell is queene? There are also various punctuation errors…
Susan asks…
should i show my girlfriend this cute picture i made of her?
ok. so here is my deal. im casey. im 15 years old and my girlfriend kelly is 14. last summer, we went to the beach together and i managed to get a really adorable picture of her sitting on a rock wall along the beach in a cute little bikini. her sweet blonde hair looked gold against the sun and her eyes were blue and shiny. it was the most perfect picture ever!
several months later, i was taking some pictures of some old things my grandma was selling at a garage sale and my eye happened to catch this beautiful little brass birdcage. it was a decorative birdcage-round with little gold leaves and vines circling around it. it had a swinging perch inside…you know? like a bird would sit on? so i took a picture of it!
anyway, i let my deepest fantasies get the best of me and i went to photoshop and spliced the 2 pictures together. i had to erase both backgrounds from each picture, and i made a copy of the birdcage and erased the “back” bars of the cage via photoshop. i then, took the picture of my girlfriend and put her behind the cage and seated her on the swing. next, i put the back bars back in so it looked like they surrounded her. i adjusted the size of her and the swing to make it look like she was seated on it. after all was said and done, it looked like she was INSIDE the birdcage and it was such a darling picture. i then added a background of a beautiful garden behind her and made the cute little golden cage look like it was hanging in a gazebo. when the whole picture was done, it looked so perfect!
my question now is: should i show her the picture or do you think it will embarass her? my brother told me that she may be humiliated if she thinks my sexual fantasy is of me holding her prisoner in a birdcage! but i think it’s just an innocent picture and it’s really cute! and i wouldn’t really do that to her for real! my mom saw the picture as well and she said she thought it was really cute and that kelly looked adorable sitting inside a pretty little birdcage. should i show her the picture or do you think it is a stupid idea?
what do you all think?
Rebecca answers:
That sounds really sweet and thoughtfull, i mean you have gone to alot of effort and it sounds like its paid off, it sounds like something sweet and nice. Obviously if this is a rather new relationship then it might seem a little weird, just because some people are a bit funny about photos of themselves, but you two sound quite close, so i think you could show it to her and explain you were just experimenting but thought it looked very beautiful and that she was the best part about the photo. And that theres no fantasy thing about it too! Be sure to mention that, if youre at ease with each other, you laugh that idea off, tell her thats what your brother said, and make a joke out of it, i think thats the best way to tackle that aspect of it. I think you should show her too, mainly for the reason of if you dont, and she finds it, she maybe be a little scared off and weirded out by it if she doesnt understand your innocent motives behind it. Relationships work on honesty and trust and it sounds like you have that so i think give it a go, if she doesnt like it, just apologise and say you meant well, you just really loved the picture of her and wanted to make it speacial. I Personally wouldn’t mind, your obviously a creative sensetive and loving boyfriend so i’m sure she’ll understand why you did it; because you adore her!!
It sounds lovely.
Good luck.
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